[SP/Writing] Writing about benefits of learning a language

Because of globalization, people can get a chance to learn something and get a job abroad. If people want to get a chance to go abroad, they have to learn a language of the country that they want to go. For Example, people want to learn English and go abroad because of the economic power of the U.S. People learn other languages not only for fun but also to learn other countries.

If people learn another language, they can communicate with other people who use that language. Moreover, they can learn the countries’ culture and adapt their style rapidly. This experience can make people enjoy their life more and understand other cultures easily.

Concerning jobs, people can expand their range of work opportunities by learning other languages. For example, if people learn English, they can easily communivate with other people who use English. It is very hard to communicate with other people whi use other people and if it is possible, it is evidence that they can work together. While they work with other people, misunderstanding might occur. However, it is natural when we work with other people who use the same language. As a result, people can get more opportunities to work because they learn other languages.

It could be a chance to expand their perspectives would help them grow. Though some people do not have a plan to go abroad, they must work with other people who coem from other countries because of globalization. If you have any chance to learn foreign languages, you have to grab it. It would be a great experience for you.

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