[SP/Writing] Describe a Personal Challenge or Achievement

September 2024, I wen to Canada because I decided to learn English more. After I arrived in Toronto, I felt it is really similar to Seoul. It didn't matter about adapting this place.

Howver, I have to paln to use my money carefully in my budget. This is my challenge now. I usually use my money not to think about the future, but now I have a monthly budget and I have to use only what I can affect. It is ver hard, but I will analyze my two months' data and regulate my consumption habits.

 

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This is for using independent and dependent clauses.

 

Because, since ,although, after, before, when, if, unless, so, that, as a result of, due to ...etc

 

Watch Out Point

• Some sentences can change much shorter than before
• Preposition is always confusing