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[TOEFL/Writing] Question 2 : Discussion of Access to the Internet

려우 2025. 1. 28. 08:30
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I partly agree with Paul. If parents always monitor their children's access to the Internet, their children could wonder why they need to be restricted by parents, and this is why the children could disobey their parents. The disobedience could continue because children also have their own ego and parents need to respect theirs. I think parents' job is not to restrict their children but to guide and teach their children right from wrong. However, there is a lot of harmful content on the Internet. This is why the government must restrict some harmful content to protect children so parents do not need to. As a conclusion, my opinion is that restricting content is the government's job and guiding and teaching are parents' jobs.

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